My plan was to have the first chapter of Rebellion edited by tonight so I could give you all a tasty, newly revised and edited snippet. Unfortunately, life got in the way, and that didn’t happen. What you are instead receiving is the newly written, un-revised follow on from last week’s opening sentences. I promise I’ll do better next week!
Join myself and the other WIPpeters here, or just take a browse and read some more interesting snippets. Anyway, today’s WIPpet math is 7 sentences because 3 + 0 + 4 = 7.
In front of him, the men he had assembled around the long meeting table stared mutely at its gnarled surface, all desperate not to meet his eyes. Infuriated by the silence, he thrust the letter away from him and seethed as its decent slowed to a languid drift.
“One of you must be responsible. Everybody in this room knew the importance of this task, everyone had a task to do, and someone has failed!” Satisfied that his shouting at recaptured the attention of the chamber, Rolando lowered himself into his seat. “We must act quickly to remedy this damage. But first, someone must be punished.”
Any feedback in time for edits/rewrites of chapter 1 would be welcome! Enjoy!